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Toxic Shroom by 23MC-Studio Toxic Shroom by 23MC-Studio
Commission/Fan art for Ancient Beast TBS game: [link]

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Illustrator CS6
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:iconroseserpenthelm:
First of all, I love your skills. Your artwork is awesome, and I look forward to seeing more of it. However, I do have a few tiny nitpicks.
First of all, it's left leg looks much longer than the right- I'm not sure if this is just a simple perspective error or just part of your style, but it does look a little funny.
Second- the background. I'm assuming the mushroom is glowing, and you've done an excellent job of that effect, but there isn't any reflective light in the background grass, making the glow look somewhat out of place. Then again, I'm just nitpicky.
Third and last nitpick, some of the additional glow effects, namely near its left arm and above it, seem kind of out of place and distracting. It doesn't look much like smoke or a spore-gas, and I apologise if I hurt your feelings, but it doesn't seem to have a defined purpose. May I suggest a few tasteful wisps of smoke here-and-there instead of a few random harsh ribbons of light next time?
Again, I'm sorry if this critique was too harsh. I liked most of the glowy-bubbles near the mushrooms ankles and wrists, and I think that the soft light radiating from the smaller mushrooms was a really tasteful effect.
Keep drawing, I look forward to seeing more of your fantastic works!
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:iconpainfulkisses13:
painfulkisses13 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
Very pretty! :)
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconpainfulkisses13:
painfulkisses13 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
Welcome :)
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:iconrokage:
ROKAGE Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
Cool.
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thanks
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:iconrick-lilley:
Rick-Lilley Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
Excellent!
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:icondreadknight666:
DreadKnight666 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Are you gonna make more drawings for #Ancient-Beast by any chance ? ^^
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yes I think, always need some practice :)
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:icondreadknight666:
DreadKnight666 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Hehe, true. Good ^^
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:iconmagentaalchemist13:
MagentaAlchemist13 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome stuff!
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconsaviroosje:
Saviroosje Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
oh this is so awesome! I really like it!
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much :)
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:iconj-skipper:
J-Skipper Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
That's pretty cool! great job on the glow!
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much :)
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:iconrealtimebrush:
RealTimeBrush Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
Very nice character design.
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot :)
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:iconamynitaking:
AmynitaKing Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student General Artist
noxious miasmical goodiness
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconkaitlynnasslebell:
kaitlynnasslebell Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome :D :O
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconkaitlynnasslebell:
kaitlynnasslebell Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
no problem :)
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:iconkataang6201:
Kataang6201 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Will it make me grow if I eat it? *Mario music* :P
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
You can get high and marry Bowser and live happily ever after.
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:iconkataang6201:
Kataang6201 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Yayz. :dummy:
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:iconfantasma-x:
Fantasma-X Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really cool! :)
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconzeraan:
zeraan Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013   Digital Artist
The glowing effect is beautiful! I also like the way it's colored, especially at the bottom.
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! Really appreciated :)
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:iconmeek-penguin:
Meek-penguin Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i love the way you make things appear to be glowing, it's so vibrant and just pops.
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you, glad you like it :)
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:iconliyaperfidious:
liyaperfidious Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
The glowy bubbly effect looks good.
The colours are beautiful.
I like the small mushrooms at the bottom.
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :) Glad you like
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:iconthecowboy91:
TheCowboy91 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hahaha it's nice!!
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconabbiegoth:
AbbieGoth Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ooh, very nicely done!
shroooooms <3
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks :) glad you like
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:iconninjawerewulf:
NinjaWereWulf Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"it's a GIANT MUSHROOM!....

MAYBE IT'S FRIENDLY!!!...

FRIENDLY MUSHROOM!!! GIANT MUSHY FRIEND!!!"

Sokka from Avatar The Last Airbender.

[sorry, it's the first thing that came to mind (^^,)]
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Funny haha :)
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:iconpuppythemighty:
puppythemighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooo its all glowy and stuff! Pretty creepy... >:3
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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:icondreadknight666:
DreadKnight666 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Great job! :la: Keep up the good work!
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Sure, thanks a lot :)
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:icondreadknight666:
DreadKnight666 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
No problem. Btw, I would appreciate it if you could use the exact name of the creatures in titles and also provide a link in description (in addition) starting with http:// , all these would help with SEO and stuff like that :) Thanks!
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:icondreadknight666:
DreadKnight666 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
And if you get to mention the group, even better; telling you all these because you want to make quite a few fan art for the project ^^
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Sure, I've changed it.
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:icondreadknight666:
DreadKnight666 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you, It does help having "Ancient Beast" as text in description or title, that's why I mentioned "in addition" before :D Sorry if I'm being too picky about this ^^' Cheers!
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:icon23mc-studio:
23MC-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Sorry, I fixed it :D
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:icondreadknight666:
DreadKnight666 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome! This will be featured on website soon and so on ^^
I do hope you'll spend this about of time on future fan art because I care more about quality rather than quantity :)
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DreadKnight666 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Congrats! Featured in
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